[Daily Doodle] Winry from Fullmetal Alchemist

There have been two major rule changes in my writing project! Both of which I am way too tired to discuss tonight XD Will try tomorrow

Daily Doodle: I seem to be in a "girls kicking ass" mood, which is fine by me.

Anyway, I enjoy Winry and I especially enjoy her being strong and willing to beat Ed up when he totally deserves it. So the vaguely defined thing she is sitting on is probably Ed. I'm less happy with this one than I've been with my other recent girly doodles -- it's very rough, because I am frankly too tired to clean it up.

However! This makes it a good opportunity for critique, because I DO want to clean it up, and would love to correct it at the same time. I as usual (lately) can't seem to manage legs, and I can't figure out what's off about her face. And a bunch of other small things I am too tired to pick at. Have at, I guess? =D
Time: 45 mins I guess?

( Daily Doodle: Winry from FMA )

Daily Word Count: 438