[Comic] One Piece - Franky's First Cola (Franky, Iceburg) (G)

[justira]

Title: Franky's First Cola
Fandom: One Piece
Characters/Pairings: Franky and Iceburg star; Kokoro and Tom of course play a part =)
Rating: G
Spoilers: SPOILERRIFIFC for Water 7 arc (but not Enies Lobby)
Medium: Entirely done in brush and ink, even the lines -- no pens or anything =)
Crit/Feedback: VERY VERY WELCOME =D
Notes: This is the story of Franky's first cola. It's just meant to show a small, significant moment in Franky and Iceburg's childhood. Mostly it's about being brothers =)

This is an updated version of an older work -- I didn't like the way the old one looked anymore, but still loved the idea. The old version is still available. I used to have tons and tons of notes on this thing on the old version... but I am more content with it now, so I haven't much more to say =)

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A/N: If you'd like to see my older ramblings on this comic, please go here. I still would LOVE comments/critique, but I feel better about the comic now and so have no extended griping. There are still problems, of course!


x-post: one_piece, onepieceyaoi, my journal

Comments

[muura.livejournal.com]

Wooooow, this is so gorgeous <3 the lack of panels and the blue colour made this very light and ethereal and I also love how you didn't use actual dialogue, SO CUTE. I liked Kokoro's "PANTS!!!" the most *_* a-and Franky's lanky legs, thehe.

[justira.livejournal.com]

Thanks XD

I have to admit that the PANTS-exchange is my favourite part, too XD I had a blast working on that part. I especially like Iceburg trying to disengage Franky from his shirt in the background >.>

[aciel.livejournal.com]

=D This is awesome! Though I had to go through it a couple times before I really understood what was going on--but that may be because I lack the background story?

But holy shit, wow. AWESOME.

Are you coming to ALX?