justira ([personal profile] justira) wrote2009-10-27 11:27 pm

[Daily Doodle] FFIV - Cover Me (Edge/Kain/Rydia) (PG)

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Daily Doodle: We interrupt our nascent theme-week-in-the-making to bring you... a small gift for [personal profile] seventhe/[livejournal.com profile] first_seventhe!

I must also thank [personal profile] lassarina for her advice and late-night tips here! I tried to incorporate your suggestions -- the ones that didn't make it are out because of my inability to depict them, not because of some lack of merit =P

I have a lot more commentary, but it's going below the cut for once >.>



Okay so!

In case it's not obvious this whole thing is like! ONE BIG BAD VISUAL PUN OR SOMETHING except I tried to also go for Deep Meaning at 1am so uh yeah >.>

For one, I played with what parts of these guys' faces are ALWAYS COVERED. (trufax: I am always weirded out when always-covered faces or parts of faces are exposed!) And that was basically me being a big big dork.

But on a more serious note:

Rydia's hand covers Edge's mouth.
Edge's hand touches Kain's face.
Kain's (left) hand rests on Rydia's heart (left breast).

>.>

Also they are all looking at each other, directions of gazes following the hand-to-hand-to-hand.

.... yeah I am a dork and a nerd and all that, I know.

They're all supposed to be like sleeping or something, but they are all of them cheating at it >.>

That aside, I still think it has so many problems but ffffff I cannot stay up any longer today, I am SO SORRY Sev! XD I hope you enjoy it anyway.

I do want to redo this someday; I think it's a fun idea. When I do, though, what do you think -- should I reverse their gazes, so Kain looks at Edge, Edge at Rydia, and Rydia at Kain?

Anyway, uh, sorry it is not more awesome! Someday! Someday I will come back to it. Speaking of which crit is SUPER DUPER WELCOME on this one, also known as HELP ME FIX IT ._____.





Backdated 2 hours
Time: oh gosh do I have to disclose. 3 hours? I know, I know >.< Threesomes just always take SO LONG to arrange all the limbs and crap, ufff XD
lassarina: (Rydia)

[personal profile] lassarina 2009-10-28 02:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, man, Rydia's open eye/quirked mouth totally makes this piece look so much more alive!

I LOVE KAIN'S LONG SWISHY FOOFY HAIR. I don't even. WHAT.

Also I really love the way Rydia's hand is curling over Edge's mouth. It's super awesome.

*rolls in OT3 delight*