You've orchestrated a tenderness between the three that is both believable and touching. Too many fictions between the three have them interacting like sensitive teenage girls. Here you've given them realistic dialogue and kept the appropriate pieces unvoiced. And do those silences echo!
I also believe the game doesn't explore Braska enough and am always happy to see a well-written Braska. I hope to read more FFX fiction from you.
By the way, I am still thinking about what instrumental music to suggest/upload for you. And I have added you!
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You've orchestrated a tenderness between the three that is both believable and touching. Too many fictions between the three have them interacting like sensitive teenage girls. Here you've given them realistic dialogue and kept the appropriate pieces unvoiced. And do those silences echo!
I also believe the game doesn't explore Braska enough and am always happy to see a well-written Braska. I hope to read more FFX fiction from you.
By the way, I am still thinking about what instrumental music to suggest/upload for you. And I have added you!